Major Flaw
Ok, the drawing itself has amazing detail which cannot be disputed, but the problem is... you have no barrel, only a flashlight on the end that looks like it's really supposed to be a supressor... also, what is displayed here is NOT a colt, it's an M416.
Ok, the name is my bad. But the flashlight on the barrel is a mystery to me too, but it was there on the photograph I used for reference, so I just draw what I saw.
Not bad, but...
A few tips-
1-The knees are too bulky
2-She just a bit on the chubby side, try reducing the body mass a teeny bit
3-The face looks far too manly, try getting rid of that epic cheekbone and making the nose a tad smaller
4-You can never go wrong with boobs, that you did well ;)
5-She's got no neck! :o Should try to make her neck a bit longer, otherwise she looks... dwarfish.
Overall, a fairly good attempt but still needs touching up, and so a 7/10 and a 3/5. Just keep trying there.
Haha. Ok. Thanks^^
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Age 29, Male
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St. Mary CHS
Canada, ON, Brockville.
Joined on 6/21/08
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