x13Spiral13x's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sucks to be Luigi: Link+Daisy]

hahahahahaha XD

Nice one link, way to get out of that :P

Seriously though great quality and hilarity as always, watchin' ya on DA too, love these sucks to be wigi strips XD

Keep up the funny X)

[cute anime girl 2]

Nice Job

Fairly well done, although the lines seem a bit pixelated. Other than that It's very nice, so you get a 9/10 :3 Reminds me of a girl in the anime Please! Teacher

[Daft Punk Shoes]

That is Fing AMAZING

This is completely serious, could I buy a pair from you? :D

[H&K M4]

Major Flaw

Ok, the drawing itself has amazing detail which cannot be disputed, but the problem is... you have no barrel, only a flashlight on the end that looks like it's really supposed to be a supressor... also, what is displayed here is NOT a colt, it's an M416.

Eddde responds:

Ok, the name is my bad. But the flashlight on the barrel is a mystery to me too, but it was there on the photograph I used for reference, so I just draw what I saw.

[+Come here+]

Very Nice

But... you missed something fairly important which would be foreshortening. The hand reaching out should be larger as it is closer, but toher than that a very fine work.

[-Bikini Chick-]

Not bad, but...

A few tips-

1-The knees are too bulky
2-She just a bit on the chubby side, try reducing the body mass a teeny bit
3-The face looks far too manly, try getting rid of that epic cheekbone and making the nose a tad smaller
4-You can never go wrong with boobs, that you did well ;)
5-She's got no neck! :o Should try to make her neck a bit longer, otherwise she looks... dwarfish.

Overall, a fairly good attempt but still needs touching up, and so a 7/10 and a 3/5. Just keep trying there.

JKAmovies responds:

Haha. Ok. Thanks^^

[kupo707]

More awesomeness :3

Love all your art dude, it's just awesome xD

To the guy under me: The heavens gate is a lvl 80 2h sword from maplestory. Yeah, I still play lol, I'm a maplegeek.

Back to the art, 4/5 because she is missing one foot, which seems a bit off, but still a great job!

[I Think I'm Being Watched...]

hahaha

I remember playing that game... i was like 6, and the wall creatures scared the shit out of me. I actually pissed myself once playing that xD Great drawing :D A little weird on the coloring, but still a nice feel to it :D 4/5 cuz the background looks strange compared to the rest of the colours.

psst... mind scouting me :)

[Jasmine (Layla)]

Not Bad

From the waist up she looks great, but the bottom half is waaay out of proportion. Just make he rlegs longer and she'll look amazing (you'll probably have to extend the skirt just a tad)

[QT Ruby]

Q: Am I QT?

A: Yes, good job dude :D

Hen-Riko responds:

thanks pal, i'm looking forward to improve my style