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aHaHaHaHa

When it first came on, I thought it was jsut stupid, but when i kept listening it got pretty funny xD Nice ending btw :P 5/5/10/10/fav and OMG AVERAGE SCORE: 10/10

Alright

It's not bad, but it could certainly use some work. The intro is very quiet and slow, and does not bring "delight" to mind at all. The song progresses rather gloomily until nearly a minute and a half in, and at that point it just sounds like a classic mario song. Still very original but needs to be faster, and ahve a greater variety of sounds. Overall, 6/10 2/5

Great Collab :3

I loved the way the song progressed, this is definitely the level of quality to expect from a callaboratory piece of work. Very well done, nice mix of sounds, high quality (not shaky, fuzzy etc.) and generally AWESOME I really hope you two work on another pice-I think it would come together very nicely :3 5/5 10/10 FAVE xD

RenoakRhythm responds:

ya this came together in a day... it says more for SinJim though, he is amazing, knows his stuff like you can't beleive. More props to him.

Thanks for the review.

Cool

It was very well done except for one thing-the random "COME ON" sounded like shit (no offence) but you might want to just make it less abrubt and shaky-then it might sound alright. Change the other times it's said too. overall 9/10 4/5 but still a fav :)

ZooSafari responds:

ROFL XD Thanks for listening and favoring ^^

I'm canadian too eh? :P

Not that it matters, i just liek to say it eh? hehe. Anyways, cool song-well mixed, good voice, somewhat entrancing, overall very well done. :) 5/5/fave

Argyros responds:

:D

I've never met a Canadian who ACTUALLY says "Eh" :P

Glad you liked it :D

Coolness :D

Very entrancing, well done :). btw i've never heard of the genre house b4-what does it mainly consist of?

Holy shit...

I totally zoned out listening to this, truly amazing. I just couldn't stop listening. Mustve been in my basement for an hour b4 some1 finally came and shocked me the hell out of listening to it lol xD Freaking amazingly irresistable!!! 5/5/fave

Awesomeness :)

I can't wait for the full version :D gets really awesome at 34ish. Well dne xD be sure to finish this. 5/5

dO_Ob

Massively wonderful on all levels. xD Very Catchy. Great job man, keep it up.It's especially good considering the time limit. 5/5/fav but only thing i think could use a tiny little touch up is make the clapping noise a little bit louder at a few parts because it can become tough to here

/<<[S-p-i-r-a-l]>>\

RenoakRhythm responds:

spiral, thanks for the advice, and i'll be re working a number of my songs for professional copies soon.

Thanks for the review. :)

Well Built

I found the whole song good, but i especially liked how you built it up, almost like a story was slowly unfolding, and then the action began around 1:18ish. Then around 1:30ish the conflict begins. Then, the lowest ponit ahs been reached around 2:00... just at the end it seems as if it is about to come back, and strong but sadly this is incomplete... Very well done though. I look forward to the full version. Would do well as a lengthly opener to something like a film. 5/5/fave

blackattackbitch responds:

Funny cuz I always do these songs with a story in mind. This didn't turn out as I had originally intended, I had meant to make a purely terrifying song. Oh yeah, I do plan to have this song kinda explode into the most terrifying melody I can muster. Thanks for the good review! I'll make sure to inform you when I'm done.

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Canada, ON, Brockville.

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